Section 1
Briana Cox and Larry Maya: To improve your voice thread you could put examples with the explanations. Maybe you could make your slides more colorful and provide more information thats not already on the slide.
Bryan Carcallas
Good project.. just make the fonts a little bigger. -Bianca
I think your voice thread was good, but you really could've made it better if you made more interesting or imaginative examples and pictures.- Dustin Vo
I agree with dustin... more pictures, because it is not just about color, but seeing how its done through a visual- Chris Torres
Section 2
Section 3
Add some color- Chris Torres
Section 4
Briana cox and larry Maya: Make slides more colorful and less boring, but you had good explanations of everything.
It was a bit slow, so the writing faded too quickly to fully comprehend what you were trying to write. It would help if you were more prepared and/or had it memorized before you said each part. That way it would not be so slow and hard to follow. -Victoria Lathulerie
Add more colors -Bianca
Make the font a little bigger and add more color to make the person watching it more interested in what you are talking about. Good job! :) -Nicole
I don't like how the background is all black, it gets a bit boring. Good explanation though, nicely done. -Elizabeth Ramos
More color and bigger font- Chris Torres
i agree with chris other then that it was good. - Alicia Garcia
Jay Canonizado 10-4 Period 7
That was good with all the examples but it could have been a little more exciting but great job- Julian Chicoine
Section 6
Not bad. The only thing that I would add would be a conclusion. Maybe more pictures if possible also.
-Victoria Lathulerie
simple and easy to understand, the only problem i had was the small font. maybe make a litter bigger? (:
- Jessie Wong[:
I like yours, it was easy to understand, and it helped me, I agree with Jessie, maybe you can make the font bigger? Overall, good job! :) - Kathy Parra
Make bigger font ! and maybe like examples? -Vivi Vo
I think it was pretty informative, but I agree with Jessie, you could've made the font a little bigger and had a bit more pictures. Overall, it was good. - Dustin Vo
- it was good i liked it. it was informative. bigger font would be good though. - alicia garcia
I would recommend using a larger font because some of the information is hard to read. Other than very good job! Everything was easy to understand (= -Lauryn Lau
Briana Cox and Larry Maya: To improve your voice thread you could put examples with the explanations. Maybe you could make your slides more colorful and provide more information thats not already on the slide.
Bryan Carcallas
Good project.. just make the fonts a little bigger. -Bianca
I think your voice thread was good, but you really could've made it better if you made more interesting or imaginative examples and pictures.- Dustin Vo
I agree with dustin... more pictures, because it is not just about color, but seeing how its done through a visual- Chris Torres
Section 2
Section 3
Add some color- Chris Torres
Section 4
Briana cox and larry Maya: Make slides more colorful and less boring, but you had good explanations of everything.
It was a bit slow, so the writing faded too quickly to fully comprehend what you were trying to write. It would help if you were more prepared and/or had it memorized before you said each part. That way it would not be so slow and hard to follow. -Victoria Lathulerie
Add more colors -Bianca
Make the font a little bigger and add more color to make the person watching it more interested in what you are talking about. Good job! :) -Nicole
I don't like how the background is all black, it gets a bit boring. Good explanation though, nicely done. -Elizabeth Ramos
More color and bigger font- Chris Torres
i agree with chris other then that it was good. - Alicia Garcia
Jay Canonizado 10-4 Period 7
That was good with all the examples but it could have been a little more exciting but great job- Julian Chicoine
Section 5
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Section 6
Not bad. The only thing that I would add would be a conclusion. Maybe more pictures if possible also.
-Victoria Lathulerie
simple and easy to understand, the only problem i had was the small font. maybe make a litter bigger? (:
- Jessie Wong[:
I like yours, it was easy to understand, and it helped me, I agree with Jessie, maybe you can make the font bigger? Overall, good job! :) - Kathy Parra
Make bigger font ! and maybe like examples? -Vivi Vo
I think it was pretty informative, but I agree with Jessie, you could've made the font a little bigger and had a bit more pictures. Overall, it was good. - Dustin Vo
- it was good i liked it. it was informative. bigger font would be good though. - alicia garcia
I would recommend using a larger font because some of the information is hard to read. Other than very good job! Everything was easy to understand (= -Lauryn Lau